The Lion King Movie Trip - First Draft

26.7.19


When we got to school we got on the bus and went to Te ahu to watch the lion king  and I heard kids crunching on their popcorn.    

Wonderful Sentences.

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.

We know that wonderful sentences need:

• detail (elaboration)
• Capital letters and full stops
• Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
• Quality vocab - WOW words

WALT recognise different parts of speech.

• Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi
• Adjectives describe nouns. Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
• Verbs are doing words. Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
• Adverbs describe verbs. eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.

EXAMPLES

1. The bird is angry. 

2. The bluey-blackish bird is very angry.

3. The mean, bluey-blackish bird is angrily staring at its terrified, furry prey.

1.The cat is sad.  

2. The black cat is awfully sad. 

3. The midnight cat is shedding a tear as it waits for the witch to return.